Specific purpose: To convince the audience that the U.S. has been ineffective
in its efforts to stabilize Afghanistan
Thesis statement: “U.S. intervention in Afghanistan has increased violence,
created a vulnerable central government, and done little to reduce the
poppy fields.”
5. Correcting the poor specific purpose. Have students pick out what is wrong with the
following specific purpose statements.
a. To explain how volcanoes form, some types of volcanoes, and how a volcano
actually erupts.
6. Rewriting the thesis statement. Rewrite the following thesis statements so that they are more
effective.
a. I will describe the country of Greece and also tell you about the Greek islands.
b. I want to inform you about hearing ear dogs.
InfoTrac/Library Database Exercise
Using your library databases, find 10 interesting topics for an informative speech and 10
controversial topics for a persuasive convincing speech.