Chapter 04: Planning Business Messages
53. Which of the following sentences does not show gender bias?
Two firemen will collect the toy donations.
Every flight attendant must submit her security clearance card before boarding.
All managers and their wives are invited to Friday’s cocktail party.
The servers at Cafe Divine are always professional.
54. Which of the following is the best wording to avoid racial, ethnic, age, and disability bias?
Hsiao-Nan Yi, a Chinese American, was elected board president.
James O’Keefe, 56, will deliver the keynote address at the awards banquet.
AARP membership is open to anyone age 50 or over.
Our new receptionist is confined to a wheelchair.
55. You want to simplify your language and use short, familiar words that your audience will recognize. Which of the
following sentences has the best wording?
Your remuneration will be commensurate with your results.
Please substantiate that the new color scheme doesn’t obfuscate the overall message.
Employees are invited to attend a special luncheon next week.
Your presence at Friday’s meeting is compulsory.
56. You want to use precise, vigorous words to give your readers more information and keep them interested. Which of
the following sentences has the best wording?
Your order will ship next week.
Please get back to me as soon as possible.
Our latest income statement shows a decrease in profits.
The March balance sheet reports a 10 percent decrease in expenses for the first quarter of the fiscal year.
57. Select the most accurate statement about team writing.
Team writing is especially important for short documents such as memos, letters, and informational briefs.
Because collaboration usually takes longer, team writing is not useful for documents with short deadlines.
Members of effective teams are usually eager to implement their recommendations.
Team-written documents and presentations are not standard in most organizations because collaboration has
many disadvantages.
58. Which of the following statements about team writing is most accurate?
In preparing big projects, teams will usually function together for each phase of the writing process.
Team members are more likely to work together during Phase 2 of the writing process than any other phase.
To save time, teams should go through the revision and evaluation phase just one time.