Chapter 10
Freedom and Confinement (p. 679)
STRUGGLING AGAINST STEREOTYPES: POEMS (p. 680)
CHRYSTOS
Today Was a Bad Day like TB (p. 681)
Even before Europeans arrived on the shores of mainland North America, their dis-
eases preceded them, spread by travelers from the islands where contact first took
place. Measles was especially deadly. Some historians maintain that explorers and
settlers from Europe found little resistance because so many of the indigenous nations
of the eastern seaboard of the Americas had been decimated by epidemics, leaving
large areas seemingly uninhabited and ready for the taking. Native Americans have
been particularly susceptible to tuberculosis, and as the disease reappeared with new
force in the 1990s, statistics revealed that new cases numbered 16.5 per 100,000 peo-
ple among Native Americans in 1995. The rate means that this ethnic group has more
than twice the risk of contracting TB of the general population in the United States
and five times the risk for non-Hispanic whites. So when Menominee poet and activist
Chrystos says in her title “Today Was a Bad Day like TB,” the simile has added mean-
a stereotype that continues to oversimplify Native American culture in the minds of
many enthusiastic onlookers. More recently, Native Americans have been
characterized in popular thought as victims robbed of their culture and dignity,
unable to cope with the modern world but cut off from their traditions. Perhaps each
of these stereotypes began with a grain of truth—clichés usually do. But the
stereotypes are also fallacious oversimplifications or overgeneralizations about a group
whose history, culture, and degree of involvement in mainstream society are
heterogeneous and complex.
Some members of this diverse ethnic group prefer the term Native American, but
others insist on being called American Indians or on using specific group names:
Choctaw, Laguna Pueblo, and so forth. Richard Rodriguez insists that, far from
vanishing as a racial and ethnic group, Indians live on in the faces and many of the
customs of Hispanic Americans. Chrystos, who did not grow up on a reservation and
calls herself an Urban Indian, has chosen as a political act to discard all of the
European ancestry of her mother’s family and to fully identify herself as a Menominee
like her father. Growing up feeling like an outsider, she moves to the inside of the
Native American group and fights to retain the distinctiveness of the traditions that
remain. She angrily battles against the theft of items of culture for economic gain in
“Today Was a Bad Day like TB” and in other texts.
other groups exist only in relation to them.
When the speaker retches, trying to “get it out,” she compares her rage to
tuberculosis. But the disease does not go away as she painfully coughs up her own
body fluids. Like a bacillus, the harm done by the destroyers of native culture cannot
be expelled. Both are the result of the same sort of invasive callousness. Students
should not deceive themselves that Chrystos is speaking metaphorically when she
expresses rage toward all whites. Yes, she is angry. Even the punctuation and the
structure of the poem deliberately subvert the rules of traditional English verse.
The crude language of the poem’s final lines is appropriate to the theme. Subtlety
would be lost on those who are unable to see the enormity of their intrusion, as she
shows us in earlier lines. Many students believe that the anger of Chrystos or Native
Americans who protest the appropriation of cultural symbols for sports team names is
extreme and unjustified. They see such complaints as whining about inconsequential
DWIGHT OKITA
In Response to Executive Order 9066 (p. 682)
Quickly scanning through Executive Order 9066, issued by President Franklin D.
Roosevelt on February 19, 1942, the reader might believe that a benevolent govern-
ment wished to do a favor for Americans of Japanese descent. Internment in concen-
tration camps is not mentioned. Instead, military officials are instructed to “prescribe
military areas . . . from which any or all persons may be excluded,” with no specific
indication of what people are intended. Anyone the military considers a threat may be
kept out of “military areas” as defined by “the appropriate Military Commanders.”
This is to be done to prevent “espionage and . . . sabotage to national defense material,
national defense premises, and national defense utilities.” There is no indication in
the order that such categories include the prosperous farms and businesses of Japanese
Americans who had spent years carving out lives for their families in California, Ore-
gon, Washington, and Hawaii. It is not surprising that it came as a shock to some fami-
lies when they found themselves first in makeshift stalls or shacks thrown up on race-
tracks, fairgrounds, and livestock enclosures, and later in deserted areas that amounted
to prison camps. Executive Order 9066 states in two separate places that the people
were killed. Barbed wire and guard towers surrounded the camps, and those trying to
escape could be shot. In his 1995 novel Snow Falling on Cedars, David Guterson
imagines how it might have been: “He remembered Manzanar, the dust in the bar-
racks, in the tar-papered shacks and cafeteria; even the bread tasted gritty. They’d
worked tending eggplants and lettuces in the camp garden. They’d been paid little,
the hours were long, they’d been told it was their duty to work hard” (162). Many sons
and husbands also felt it was their duty to serve their country, the United States, in the
war. They fought, even while their families were imprisoned as potential saboteurs.
The school writings of children who were interned in the camps reveal physical dis-
comfort, mixed with cheerful trust in the goodness of life. They complain about the
cold or the heat, the sandstorms, the fence, and the cramped conditions requiring
whole families to share one room. But they enjoy the outdoors as children might on a
camping vacation and wax eloquent about “the good drinking water, the free food, the
free electricity and free water.” Unlike their parents, they did not have to be con-
cerned about what would happen when it was time to resume their lives. Even before
the war, laws prohibited free and clear ownership of property by Asian immigrants,
In the first stanza of “In Response to Executive Order 9066,” Dwight Okita’s
young female speaker tells the relocation officials that she has packed “three packets of
tomato seeds” in preparation for her journey. She introduces her friend Denise, who
calls tomatoes “love apples.” When the speaker’s father says “they won’t grow” in the
internment camps, the obvious connection is that love probably can’t survive there
either. Although the next three stanzas continue to describe the speaker’s relationship
with her white friend, a friend who abandons her as a result of prejudice, the tomatoes
are not mentioned again until the final stanza, thus framing the poem with a
metaphoric image. Once the seeds of friendship have been planted, young Miss
Ozawa claims, they will come to fruition, given time. The assumption seems
optimistic about the ability of love to overcome hate, given time. Perhaps this is based
on naiveté. After all, her letter begins with a polite acceptance of the government’s
“invitation,” as if it were a vacation. She is being a good girl when she packs her
galoshes, because this is the sort of thing a mother might remind her to pack. This is
ironic if she is going to Manzanar or another desert camp, however, and again implies
that she doesn’t grasp the situation. But Denise is naive as well, accepting the
assumptions of her elders that Japanese Americans will be more loyal to Japan than to
America. Furthermore, no Japanese American was convicted of espionage against the
United States through the whole course of World War II, a fact that cannot be wholly
attributed to concentration camps, because none in Hawaii were interned and many
Japanese Americans served heroically in the U.S. military. It is an especially effective
device to have a young girl speak about such prejudice, because the audience can
empathize with someone who is obviously no danger to her country. Both content and
style—concrete words like hot dogs or messy room, for example—indicate that she is
American rather than Japanese. Her friend’s rejection seems doubly hurtful because
the injustice is so clear. Because the bombing of Pearl Harbor came as such a shock,
many Americans could not believe that the Japanese had been able to carry it out
without help from collaborators in Hawaii. There was great fear that such an attack
would be mounted against the West Coast of the United States. Nevertheless, as
government studies maintain, the main reason for internment seems to be the
visibility of people who looked like the enemy. “Japs” became demonized as a racial
group, while animosity toward the enemy in Europe, so like mainstream Americans in
appearance and culture, tended to be focused on the figures of Adolf Hitler, Benito
Mussolini, and their followers, rather than all ethnic Germans or Italians.
Chrystos in “Today Was a Bad Day like TB” is furious at the betrayal of her
culture by those who sell Native American possessions to whites who reveal their
unconscious biases by misusing the artifacts. Her tone is bitter as she takes the insider
stance as a member of a group that has been wronged, condemning the outsiders—the
PAT MORA
Legal Alien (p. 684)
Pat Mora’s poem “Legal Alien” expresses irony even in its title, as so often the opposite
term “illegal alien” makes the news. The speaker is legitimate; however, her status brings
its own issues. She lives in the space in between; rather than living in the margins, the
speaker is actually in the middle, as in the space where two circles overlap in a Venn
diagram. At first glance, most readers would consider being bilingual an advantage, offer-
ing access to the best of two worlds. Mora gives a hint of the divisiveness of being “Bi-
lingual” and “Bi-cultural” by inserting a hyphen in each word, implying that the person
who is bilingual and bicultural is split in two. She also capitalizes the words, as if they
were proper names or nationalities, in a poem in which few words are capitalized. The
poem consists of one complex sentence with conversational quotations and parenthe-
tical comments woven into it. Referring to herself as “American but hyphenated,” the
speaker frames her poem with hyphenated words, those of the first line and the final
word: Bi-laterally. This final word has political connotations; it is a word often used to
describe a truce or other agreement to which both sides agree. But the speaker feels pre-
judged by both sides; perhaps the only point the two sides of her ethnicity can agree up-
on concerns her position, one in which she can never be right.
Being bilingual and bicultural carries certain advantages. The speaker is able to
function in two cultures, is “able to sit in a paneled office”—that is, has the distinct
advantage of being gainfully employed—and is able to enjoy the advantages of Mexican
culture represented by being able to order food, itself an economic plus. The poem can
be read closely for differences between her references to being Mexican and her
references to being American. For example, the English question “How’s life?” is
answered by the Spanish sentence for “They’re driving me crazy.” Though she doesn’t
The stereotyping that Mora describes is more subtle than the racism described in
the earlier poems in this cluster. Here, the prejudice comes from both sides. If the
bicultural person takes pride in one heritage, she is at risk of denying the other. While
Chrystos is angry about the appropriation of Native American culture implied in a
white person’s illegitimate imitation, Mora seems simply frustrated, going crazy over
her ethnically split personality. We might question whether her position is of necessity
psychologically damaging. Unlike the situation in the poem by Louise Erdrich, in
which the stereotypes of dominant culture are internalized at the expense of self-
esteem, the innocent bewilderment of Okita’s letter writer, or the sarcasm and anger of
TOI DERRICOTTE
Black Boys Play the Classics (p. 685)
A search for Web sites on African Americans and classical music quickly uncovers
AfriClassical.com (www.chevalierdesaintgeorges.homestead.com/index.html), which has
concentrated on the topic since 2000. Opera singers Leontyne Price and Jessye Norman
spring to mind when thinking of African Americans in classical music, but the Web site
lists “52 composers, conductors, and instrumental performers—Africans, African
Americans, and Afro-Europeans. Many are alive today, but one lived 500 years ago!
These artists are unknown to most of us, yet are so numerous this site can present only a
fraction of them. They have made enduring contributions to Classical Music.” The Web
site also has audio. Instructors and students will find other examples of African
Americans playing classical music online. Because people of African descent have long
been part of European and American society, it should not be surprising to find them
involved in many different artistic genres. However, the stereotype of African Americans
engaging in jazz, blues, gospel, rap, or other popular forms perhaps makes the sight of
“black kids” playing Brahms surprising to the people in Penn Station. The “[w]hite men
in business suits” take the young men for granted as street musicians who are working for
contributions, but the men of color “stand with their mouths open”—their surprise and
Luther King Jr. and others spoke at the march on Washington and Marian Anderson
stood in the same spot and sang the National Anthem.
It should not be surprising that the boys in Penn Station play Brahms on stringed
instruments. But the stereotypes remain. By showing them in “ratty / sneakers & T-
shirts,” the poet identifies their probable economic status. This poverty may be what
readers rightly or wrongly expect. But the music goes against expectations. The
speaker asks, “Why does this trembling / pull us?” The word trembling catches the
vibrations of the violins and the cellos and hints at the emotional vulnerability of the
players and the watchers/listeners. She has just described a small child, absorbed in
the music and the young men who are playing, the experience evoking worship. The
“pulling” is emotional and physical, a response that only music or another deeply
aesthetic experience is capable of bringing out. We are attracted to those who make
music like iron to a magnet. In the final lines, Derricotte offers two explanations for
the audience’s response: perhaps from different listeners, perhaps describing
wavering feelings within each listener. The child, the “brown men,” and the players
become “one” as they experience the music together. Of course, this penultimate
image implies much more: that human beings all share certain responses and that
people of different skin colors are not different where it counts. However, the final
line wryly undercuts this idea of equality, which after all borders on cliché. Readers
might discuss tone at this point. Is the line meant to be taken seriously, indicating
NAOMI SHIHAB NYE
Blood (p. 686)
A great deal of autobiography goes into the writing of Naomi Shihab Nye, whether she
is writing young-adult fiction or subtle poems like “Blood.” As part of a family that has
lived in the United States and in Israel, Nye knows a great deal about the ethnic stere-
otyping represented by the poems in this cluster. Her poem begins by quoting her fa-
ther: “A true Arab knows how to catch a fly in his hands.” The image captures the
playfulness of her father, the irony of stereotypes, and the hand-eye coordination im-
plied in the lightning-quick action of catching a fly. Later in the poem, the speaker’s
father tells her that a “true Arab” would understand the spiritual significance of giving
back to the sky the family name—Shihab, for “shooting star”—when one dies. The
two images take the reader from the ridiculous to the sublime, with the magic of wa-
termelon as a healing substance in between. By choosing these three bits of family and
ethnic folklore out of many possibilities, Nye paints a remarkably wide picture of the
culture in microcosm. “True Arabs”—in the world of the poem—are quick, witty,
wise, magical, and cosmically connected. Therefore, when a girl comes to the door “to
see the Arab,” the reader knows a bit about what an Arab may be, although the sort of
By talking within the group about what makes a “true Arab,” the dialogue in this
poem challenges the simplistic stereotype. However, such definitions within an ethnic
group can lead to chauvinism as well as self-respect. Ethnic groups within a larger
culture risk becoming insular and defensive, holding on to esoteric knowledge that
leads to more discrimination and prejudice, because xenophobia—fear of the
unknown, of foreigners—thrives in an atmosphere of ignorance. When we engage in
discussions of what makes a “true American,” the worst sort of arrogance may emerge.
Gender stereotypes reign as we ask what makes a “true man” or a “true woman”;
regional prejudices come out as we try to define what makes a “true” Texan, or New
Yorker, or Tarheel, or Sooner. Immigrants with British accents or travelers from one
part of the United States to another are familiar with being asked to demonstrate their
amusing accents, in much the same way as the girl in the poem asks to see the Arab, as
if he were a museum exhibit or a performer in a freak show. Curiosity can be genuine
and has the potential to enhance understanding between cultures, but a danger exists
when curiosity is left as simply an awareness of an exotic Other rather than a person
with whom we might engage in dialogue.
Many readers can relate to the final two stanzas of Nye’s poem, in which both she
and her father are dismayed by news from the Middle East. It is really too much for
the heart to bear. Readers may notice at this point a possible double meaning for the
title. The word blood has the obvious meaning of kinship, the figurative meaning of
horror (“the headlines clot in my blood”), and the literal meaning of blood shed in
war. When we read the words “neither of his two languages can reach it,” we
understand the sense of futility as her father is unable to articulate the bewildering
reality of religious and ethnic conflicts between Palestinians and Israelis. The speaker
of the poem seeks to articulate her grief with powerful metaphors: “the headlines clot
in my blood . . . this tragedy [has] a terrible root / is too big for us. . . . I drive into the
The last lines of the poem invite the reader to think about answers to the three
questions she proposes. Who, indeed, would look at war and oppression and call
human beings civilized? We might ask for definitions of civilization, recalling that in
Native American history, the “civilized tribes” were defined by European settlers as
those who lived much like the settlers did, including adopting the practice of
enslaving other ethnic groups. Early civilizations in Egypt and Mesopotamia (present-
day Iraq) existed because wide-scale farming, war, and building projects required
forced labor. Perhaps, because civilization is connected with living in the city, the
speaker drives to a rural setting to think. It may be that civilization itself is the “tragedy
with a terrible root” that Nye describes as she describes the front-page image of war.
The victim of war, perhaps representing the ethnic group to which both he and the
speaker belong, is “[a] little Palestinian . . . [and a h]omeless fig.” The images
foreground vulnerability and inspire empathy. The question “Where can the crying
heart graze?” may be rhetorical, implying that no such place exists, even at the end of
her desperate drive. This space outside of civilization brings no peace; it provides only
the quiet in which to formulate questions. The final question seems ironic, because
the whole poem has raised the issues of definition, asking what makes a “true Arab”:
catching flies, applying healing watermelon, and looking to the stars do not have the
power to change this situation. Like the penultimate question, the final one may have
no answer. Can anything be done to bring about peace and justice? Could we answer
the question: “What is a caring human being to do now?”
work in the sort of job Mora describes in her poem, becoming fluent in both
languages. Students who have lived through the experience of being “hyphenated
Americans” may offer views on the unique position of various ethnic groups, although
instructors should be sensitive to their possible reluctance to share and should not call
on “token” students, making assumptions based on names or appearances. To single
out individual students would be to fall into the trap of stereotyping. As we look back
over the poems, readers may disagree about which speaker seems angriest, making a
case for submerged rage that is expressed with irony or sarcasm rather than openly
angry statements like those made by Chrystos. A case could be made for Nye’s poem as
the saddest, making it a good choice as the final poem in the cluster. Thinking about
the question of which speaker seems “most understanding,” you will need to clarify
what is meant by “understanding” and question whether the tolerance implied would
be appropriate in poems that seek to have readers face difficult truths, perhaps
examining our own preconceptions of certain ethnic groups. Do the poets refuse to
allow readers the comforts of denial? The “most understanding” speaker may be the
naive fourteen-year-old Japanese American girl preparing to make a forced move to an
internment camp. The underlying irony of the text—the author and the reader know
more about history and institutionalized racism than does the speaker—highlights the
innocence of her “understanding” and tolerance. No understanding is possible when
stereotyping becomes government-sanctioned profiling.
DAVID HERNANDEZ
Words without Thoughts Never to Heaven Go (p. 688)
“Words without Thoughts Never to Heaven Go,” penned by poet David Hernandez,
grapples with the complexities of racism and language. The narrator, perhaps
Hernandez himself, writes that his surname allows him to say aloud “the slur
beginning with s.” In an effort to combat the harm of slurs, many persecuted groups
have reclaimed racist, sexist, and homophobic language for use amongst themselves.
(Note the reclaiming of the term “queer” by some members of the LGBTQ
community, for example.) With such reclamations of language, people hope to shift
the meaning, the intention, behind the words. The use of ethnic and other slurs by
people outside those groups serves to marginalize, hurt, and dismiss individuals from
consideration. In Hernandez’s words, slurs are “meant to make a person of my race /
smaller, a speck inside his own skin.” The use of such slurs stems from deep-seated
insecurities over the perceived loss of patriarchal, heterosexual, white privilege.
Hernandez’s title, “Words without Thoughts Never to Heaven Go,” comes from a
quote by Claudius in Shakespeare’s Hamlet. Claudius’s meaning here is that words
must have thoughts—beliefs, intentions, desires—in order to reach heaven (or, in
simpler terms, to earn forgiveness one must really mean it). We might read Hernan-
dez’s choice of title as reinforcing his sense that language matters deeply. It might also
REMEMBERING THE DEATH CAMPS: POEMS (p. 690)
MARTIN NIEMÖLLER
First They Came for the Jews (p. 690)
Students and instructors interested in placing the literature of the Holocaust in histor-
ical and cultural perspective will find excellent materials in books, in scholarly jour-
nals from numerous discourses, and in Web sites on the Internet. Although indiscrim-
inate searches may provide excellent opportunities to evaluate texts of divergent quali-
ty, we need to direct students first to legitimate sites such as the U.S. Holocaust Me-
morial Museum (www.ushmm.org). At this writing, the Simon Wiesenthal Center,
another excellent source of information, includes on its site (www.wiesenthal.com) a
document refuting thirteen “revisionist arguments” often posted by hate groups. This
text can be used both as a source of historical background and as an example of how to
effectively respond to opposing views by presenting counterarguments referring to var-
ious types of evidence, by clarifying misleading interpretations of statistics, and by
pointing out fallacies such as equivocal use of language and false claims of authority.
Far from being a bystander or a collaborator, Martin Niemöller, along with
theologian Karl Barth and Christian activist and eventual martyr Dietrich Bonhoeffer,
spoke strongly in opposition to Hitler’s attempts to use the Protestant churches of
Germany to persecute Jews and other outsiders. But he reminds us in the poem that
oppression approaches gradually and builds in intensity with each step. For this pastor
of a large Lutheran congregation, the realization that Nazi policies were dangerous to
freedom came as early as 1933 when the state began to tell the church that Jewish
converts and those married to “non-Aryans” should be prohibited from serving as
pastors. Gradually, the racist philosophy of the Nazis began to co-opt Martin Luther,
the founder of German Protestantism, as an Aryan hero, and some Nazi apologists
insisted that Jesus Christ was not a Jew but a godlike Aryan superman. The reading of
the Old Testament and the teachings of St. Paul, who boldly declared his Judaism,
began to be frowned upon, and SS troops would attend church meetings to see that
such policies were carried out. The melding of Aryan racial pride and the trappings of
Christianity became very popular as “German Christianity” and the “positive
Christianity movement” were preached at rallies and even from many pulpits. The
youth programs of the churches began to be supplanted by Hitler youth groups.
Although the early stages of this Nazi appropriation of religion prompted
Niemöller’s vocal opposition and organized action within the Protestant churches, he
did not believe at first that Hitler was responsible for these actions. Niemöller was
passionately patriotic and had worked politically in the years between World War I
and Hitler’s election to see that Germany found a strong, anti-Communist leader. He
had been a supporter of the monarchy and served as a U-boat commander in World
War I. He had voted for the National Socialists, Hitler’s party, in 1933 and in the
previous election and had even engaged in armed resistance to Communist attempts
to gain control of the country. Later, he would come under harsh criticism for
unsuccessfully volunteering from a prison cell to command a U-boat for the Axis even
though he was quite aware by this time of Hitler’s nature and the evils of Nazism.
Still it is important to understand the strength of Niemöller’s patriotism and the
complexity of the divided loyalties felt by veterans of World War I and their families.
His sons served in the army even while their father was in solitary confinement, first in
Sachsenhausen, then in Dachau. Hitler’s hatred of Niemöller was personal. The pastor
discovered Hitler’s pettiness and cowardice in 1934 when he attended a supposed
meeting of church leaders to find that Hermann Göring had tapped his telephone and
used a careless joke to embarrass Hitler and imply that Niemöller considered him easily
influenced. When his arrest in 1937 failed to result in a conviction, Hitler told officials
that Niemöller was to be considered his “personal prisoner” and was under no
circumstances to be released. For a long period of time, Niemöller was literally
Students appreciate the simplicity of “First They Came for the Jews,” but they
often oversimplify it by assuming the argument to be specific to Niemöller’s
experience or to a time and place that has nothing to do with us. Most will get the
message without explicit explanations, though they may not apply it to themselves. It is
important to communicate the complex historical setting, one in which prejudice was
accepted throughout Europe and America, with the classes of people mentioned in
the poem seen as threats to freedom and cultural values. In composition classes, many
instructors use war propaganda along with images from current advertising campaigns
to have students analyze persuasive appeals. Reading the literature of the Holocaust in
perspective can help students realize how “commonsense” constructions of reality
when unexamined leave room for the gradual acceptance of irrational and destructive
ideas. Marshall McLuhan once said that we don’t know who first discovered water, but
it is unlikely to have been a fish. An important goal of education may be to teach the
fish how to see the water that surrounds them, to question the assumptions they have
internalized as part of a culture. Students might suggest current substitutions for the
groups mentioned in Niemöller’s poem to make it speak even more clearly to an
American audience six or seven decades after the events of the poem.
This poem is didactic rather than lyrical, and its repetitions reflect the author’s
sermonic style. Many readers find its simplicity moving and find strength in its
forthright presentation. As a response to a specific historical event, the poem may be
taken literally and its voice added to the list of witnesses whose collective experience
educates us about the Holocaust. But it can also serve as a symbolic reminder that
apathy can be dangerous and that evil comes on so gradually that we tend to ignore it
until it directly affects us. Traditionally, those in power have access to the means of
publication, and in many eras and locations these are the people who are heard. But
NELLY SACHS
Chorus of the Rescued (p. 691)
The pleas expressed by the speaker of Nelly Sachs’s poem might be made by a survivor
of any severe traumatic experience, but as a person who escaped Nazi Germany in 1940,
leaving friends behind, Sachs captures the very real pathos of those who can no longer
speak for themselves, often speaking in the voices of victims who died. Without actually
experiencing the death camps, the poet was haunted for all her life by the horrors of the
Holocaust. In her acceptance of the Nobel Prize for literature in 1966, she expressed the
identification that had permeated her life, declaring, “I represent the tragedy of the Jew-
ish people.” Perhaps this is the reason she uses the first-person-plural pronoun in this
poem, in which she speaks as a survivor. Yes, the survivors will accept freedom and safe-
ty. But they cannot forget what was left behind, the pain that was meant for them, the
fear and dread the poet felt herself, and the torture and death she experienced vicarious-
ly through others. So, as a survivor, she asks that she not be given more than she can
stand, much as a person who has almost died of thirst must take small sips of water at
first. The “worms of fear” do not go away, and those who have lived through such trau-
ma feel alienated, as if in a different part of the universe: a “constellation . . . buried in
dust.” She asks that the sun of her new universe be shown to her gradually. Being out of
the horror is almost too much to bear. And to be shown “any angry dog” would utterly
destroy the survivors: any hint of fear might bring it all back.
The emotional state of the speaker is fragile and desperate, as the metaphors of the
poem show. The survivors are like macabre musical instruments played by a personified
death; the image of bones and sinews being changed into objects to create “mutilated
music” recall the atrocities committed against the bodies of human beings in the death
camps. Images of dust recall the grave and add to the sense of fragility; these rescued
people could fall into dust like an ancient piece of fabric. According to the last lines, it is
“leave-taking” that keeps their bodies together, because breath and soul are gone. So, the
reader understands that it won’t take much to cause these “rescued” people to fall apart.
Throughout the poem, there is interplay between pronouns: the speaker and other
survivors are referred to as “we” or “us” while the rescuers, including—presumably—the
reader, are addressed as “you.” As the poem nears its end, the pronouns merge into
ambiguity. Absent from the poem are those who were not rescued. Is the “you” of the
final line the reader? Or could it be the one (or ones) left behind? The rescued are able
to greet people like the reader because they have left others. It is very sad for “leave-
taking”—loss, renunciation of joy, perhaps even survivor guilt—to be all that holds a
person together individually and as part of a community.
Literature of the Holocaust strikes a chord with many readers far beyond its
connection to their own lives. People who have lost loved ones to illness or the
MARIANNE COHN
I Shall Betray Tomorrow (p. 693)
The photograph of Marianne Cohn that accompanies her poem on the Web site
“Holocaust: A Call to Conscience” (www.projetaladin.org/holocaust/en/poetry-corner/
i-shall-betray-tomorrow-marianne-cohn.html) seems strikingly contemporary. Only
twenty-two years old when she was executed for her attempts to save Jewish children
from the Holocaust in occupied France, she could pass for one of the students in our
college classes. Looking at us from behind her glasses, she looks intellectual, strong,
and accepting of no nonsense. It is not surprising that her poem is ironic and defiant.
But she does not minimize the situation of the prisoner of conscience. There is a limit
to human endurance, and the speaker of the poem does not fool herself that she will
be able to endure past today. Perhaps behind the bravado, however, is the knowledge
that today is really all we have: when tomorrow comes, we will call it today. An
alternative title for Cohn’s poem has been used: “I’ll Crack under Torture Tomorrow
(Not Today).” We might ask students to consider the differing implications of the two
titles: is the idea of breaking under torture qualitatively different from the pejorative
concept of betraying? The result, of course, may be the same. Perhaps the difference
lies in the imputation of shame and guilt.
The title is ironic. She does not plan to betray. The speaker hopes her statement is
not true. In fact, what she seems to plan is the suicide that will thwart the betrayal.
Perhaps suicide is a betrayal in itself, because it allows the torturers to win a Pyrrhic
victory, but she realizes that this is her only way out of the real prospect of betraying
other people involved in the Resistance. The speaker knows she is in a desperate
situation, but her attitude is realistic and admirably defiant. She resists to the end.
That she is contemplating suicide as a victory over her torturers is made explicit,
beginning at line 14. She determines “to betray life / To die” and states that “the file is
for my own wrists.” The admission that she will betray tomorrow (probably by killing
herself) belies her confidence about being able to resist torture. Most military experts
concede that torture works on the strongest and most highly trained persons: John
the readers in our classrooms, who are likely to become “bystanders” who ignore or
accept the victimization of others until it actually affects them. His purpose may be to
encourage readers to open their eyes and not allow such abuses of power to be allowed
again. Sachs speaks for survivors, and her purpose may be to show readers that getting
over such trauma, even for those who escaped early, is not easy and may even be
impossible. Cohn vividly evokes the true experience of torture and communicates the
terrible decisions it requires. Her purpose may be simply to express the agony and to
help readers understand the agonizing difficulty of withstanding torture. Therefore, the
three writers provide three perspectives, each more intense than the one before. Had
she survived, Cohn might have written a poem like Sachs’s “Chorus of the Rescued.” It
is telling that when she was captured, Cohn was in the process of rescuing children in
peril, children much like Nelly Sachs when she escaped Germany as a young person.
Presumably, Cohn would have wanted those children to live free and happy, rather
than mentally imprisoning themselves in the darkness of the Holocaust, as Sachs seems
to have done. We might imagine Cohn saying, “Bring on that sun, damn it! I want the
full force of it in my face.” Otherwise, evil wins.
KAREN GERSHON
Race (p. 694)
Karen Gershon survived the Holocaust because she was one of the Jewish children
evacuated to England in 1939, the year World War II officially began in Europe. Her
parents did not survive, however, dying in the concentration camp that would have
undoubtedly reserved the same fate for her. When she speaks of her refusal to hate,
therefore, her words carry the authority of one who has a great deal to forgive and per-
haps even more survivor guilt to carry.
Issues may be raised about the appropriateness of any stance that takes the
German people off the hook for their complicity in raising the Nazis to power and
accepting the racist views and repressive measures that led to the eventual atrocities.
As we have noted in other introductions in this cluster, Nazi attitudes did not develop
and continue in a vacuum. People in many countries were willing to let outsider
groups be assigned the blame for economic and social problems following World War
I and a worldwide monetary depression. Stereotypes that denigrated Jews were the
Martin Niemöller’s family, even Niemöller himself, feel that patriotism required them
to serve in the armed forces of a government they knew to be unjust?
Gershon challenges her readers to go beyond the categories that separate and
label people. It is interesting that she uses the loaded word race as the focus of her
poem. Caricatures perpetuating stereotypes of supposedly Jewish features still may be
seen in England, Gershon’s adopted country, and the same sort of pictures were used
sometimes necessitate that ethnicity be listed on forms, some individuals choose to
leave such spaces blank. At the same time, studies seem to be indicating the
importance of genetic inheritance even in the development of personality traits once
considered to be learned behavior. Students might consider how such information
should be used as the field of genetics develops. How can we resist attempts to classify
and limit people? Gershon resists judgments that are based on seeing individuals as
symbols of an ethnic group, and by using the word race, she is able to use its negative
and arbitrary connotations to strengthen her argument against such categorization.
When Gershon’s speaker returns to Germany, she finds that her features identify
her as part of a group. She indicates that this is not her usual experience but
something that takes her by surprise. She had expected to blend in. For this reason, we
can be fairly certain that she does not imagine her reception but responds to reality.
Writing in the 1960s, Gershon may be voicing the thoughts of most living Jews when
her speaker imagines herself as one of the dead. Few families escaped knowing
someone who had died, and the sense that one had survived a close call was not
limited to Jews on the European continent or those like Gershon who had fled just
before or during the war. People who live after being involved in a disaster that kills
many of those around them are sometimes said to suffer from survivor guilt, to
irrationally believe that they are wrong to have survived when so many have died.
Gershon may also speak for many when she admits her tendency to see all
Germans as evil. Even in her rejection of hate, she still assumes that the Germans do
harbor thoughts of hate, the assumption still existing even as she vows not to hate
people for their race. In the Bible, Cain is the first murderer, having killed his brother
Abel because God loves Abel best. When God asks Cain where his brother is, Cain
takes shelter in denial. “Am I my brother’s keeper?” he responds. So God exiles him
Enjambment makes the poem read smoothly, as if the narrator speaks to us in a
conversational tone. But she uses the poetic devices of rhyme, alliteration, and parallel
structure to unify the poem in a subtle way. Style does not dominate, however, and the
content of the poem seems more important than any self-conscious literary quality.
Some readers will contend that wallowing in guilt or anger over the actions of our
parents and grandparents serves no purpose and that such events should be forgiven
and forgotten as we move on. Although it is admirable to accept people as individuals
rather than as stereotypes, however, there may be value for a culture in examining the
structures and attitudes that lead to group actions like slavery, discrimination, and
genocide, even though most people now living did not participate in them. Because
we live with the results of actions taken in the past, assumptions need constant
reevaluation, not so that we will feel guilty or be filled with rage, but so that we see
ANNE SEXTON
After Auschwitz (p. 695)
Writing in the 1950s, the German Jewish philosopher T. W. Adorno questioned the
ethics of creating literature in the wake of the atrocities of the Holocaust. “To write
poetry after Auschwitz is barbaric,” he insists. No one could possibly capture the hor-
ror of what took place, some Holocaust scholars maintain. To attempt to express in art
what can be expressed only by a scream is to trivialize and take aesthetic pleasure in
the agony of victims who are no longer alive to speak for themselves. And it is particu-