A New Assistant
Students should have edited the first two paragraphs of the memo for conciseness and then
proofread it, making any corrections that are needed. The text with corrections highlighted
appears in the file Proofreading Challenge Solution-U3B. Edits for concision have not been
highlighted. Students’ edits of the first two paragraphs will differ.
TO: All Managers
FROM: Cal Angotti
DATE: March 10, 2010
SUBJECT: Computer Usage Policy Meeting
We need to meet to revise our company policy regarding use of the Internet, e-mail, text
messaging, and instant messaging. Our current policy (attached), which dates back to 2006,