they were unsure how to diagnose or treat many of the extreme abdomen, chest, and
cardiac disorders that often appear in hospital emergency rooms.
Another cause of the problem is that precious time is often wasted on useless pa-
perwork before vital emergency treatment begins. Several years ago, a man driving
by an elementary school in my hometown had a heart attack and crashed into a
schoolyard. Seven children were taken to the emergency room three blocks away, but
the real tragedy had not yet begun. Once in the emergency room, the children were
denied treatment until their parents were contacted and the admitting forms were
filled out. By the time the forms were completed, two of the children had died.
Discussion: This speech excerpt is brief enough to be used as a classroom activity. One
approach is to divide the class into groups of four to five students each. Give each group
ten minutes to read and analyze the excerpt, and then have each group make a two–
minute report to the class assessing the strengths and weaknesses of the supporting ma-
terials in the excerpt. Another approach, of course, is to give the excerpt to each student
individually. In either case, you should be able to generate an effective class discussion.
Here is a brief analysis of the excerpt:
Paragraph One: The statistic in sentence 1 comes from a credible source. In sentence 2 the
speaker does a nice job of showing what the statistic means for the U.S. public in
general, though she might also have related it directly to her audience by stating how
many of them would probably require emergency care during the year. The quotation
3. Have students analyze one of the persuasive speeches from Part Five of this manual. Have
students focus their analysis on the speaker’s use of supporting materials.
Discussion: Every persuasive speech in Part Five deals with a question of policy and pro-
vides an excellent vehicle for giving students additional work analyzing the use—and oc-