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a. All department managers must submit Employee Performance Review Forms for all non-union
employees by February 1.
Opening Paragraphs
The following opening paragraphs are wordy and indirect. After reading each paragraph, identify the
main idea. Then, write an opening sentence that illustrates a more direct opening.
6. Our management team seeks to find additional ways to improve employee motivation through
recognition and reward programs. The current programs do not seem to generate an appropriate
7. Customer service is an integral part of our business. That’s why I was impressed when three of you
came to me to ask if you might attend a seminar called “Customer Satisfaction Strategies.” I
8. For the last seven years, we have had in place our company E-Mail and Internet Policy.
Because we realize that we can’t prohibit all personal computer use, we allow reasonable
usage. Now, however, employees are using instant messaging, and our policy needs to be
Bulleted and Numbered Lists
Many business messages include bulleted and numbered lists (see Chapter 4) to convey information
clearly and efficiently. Revise the following wordy paragraphs so that each has a brief introductory
statement and a short list with category headings. Decide what information must be deleted and
whether each list should be numbered or bulleted.
9. Job candidates receive much advice on what to do during an interview. Dozens of articles have
been written about how to succeed in an interview. Equally important, however, is what not to
do. Among the top interview mistakes, blunders, and errors a candidate for employment can
make are the following. A big no-no is failure to answer the following question, What do you
know about this company? Silence might just end a candidate’s quest for a job. Background