Ramadan
Commentary
Highly informative, clearly organized, and effectively delivered, “Ramadan” is a good example of how
speakers can combine personal experience with more traditional research materials to create an effective
speech. A video is available online and on the DVD of student speeches that accompanies this edition of
The Art of Public Speaking. Below is a synopsis.
Specific Purpose: To inform my audience about the history and practices of Ramadan.
Central Idea: Ramadan’s rich history and sacred practices make it meaningful for Muslims around the
globe.
Method of Organization: Topical
Introduction: The introduction consists of paragraphs 1–4. In paragraph 1, the speaker gains attention
by mentioning that one billion people around the world skipped lunch during the previous
month. Because the audience is composed mostly of non–Muslim American college students,
who would not immediately think of Ramadan from such a perspective, the speaker’s opening
generates curiosity about her topic. At the end of the opening paragraph, she reveals that “last
month” was the Muslim holy month of Ramadan. Paragraph 2 provides additional background
for an audience unfamiliar with Ramadan.
Paragraph 3 opens with the speaker’s credibility statement. Explaining her background and
religious affiliation helps establish her personal expertise on the topic, while noting that she now
celebrates Ramadan with other Muslim students “here on campus” relates the topic to the audi-
ence. Paragraph 4 states the speaker’s specific purpose and previews the main points she will
discuss in the body.
Body: Arranged in topical order, the body of the speech consists of two main points. The first is devel-
oped in paragraphs 5–7 and explains the history of Ramadan. Even though the speaker could re-
cite this history from memory, she cites Karen Armstrong’s history of Islam, thereby enhancing her