My Life from Toe to Head
Commentary
Creative, carefully developed, and clearly organized, “My Life From Toe to Head” exemplifies the most
important aspects of a speech of self-introduction. Its central theme is how the speaker’s height has influ-
enced her character and outlook. Here is a synopsis.
Specific Purpose: To introduce myself to the audience by explaining how my height has influenced my
perspective on life.
above average height. Paragraph 4 reveals the interesting fact that both her parents are extreme-
ly tall, while paragraph 5 explains how the speaker’s height has taught her to be self–confident
and to appreciate her appearance. Paragraph 6 brings the speaker to her head—“the most im-
portant part.” She discusses her experience working at a beauty salon and what it taught her
about interpersonal relationships. Although the use of spatial organization is unusual for an intro-