Chapter 16 Solutions to Activities
16.1 Document for Analysis: Tracy’s Poor Interview Follow-Up Letter (Obj. 4)
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Weaknesses
• Lacks conciseness; is too wordy and long.
• Includes many writing errors, such as the use of articles (a, an), figures (2 summers instead of
two summers), capitalization (Tuesday, assistant account manager, account management),
and apostrophes (your department’s need).
• Shows poor proofreading (e.g., Maraposa instead of Mariposa), spelling problems (excelent
Revision
Current date
Mr. Michael Searle
Vice President
Mariposa Agency
3021 East Van Buren Street
Phoenix, AZ 85022
Dear Mr. Searle:
Thanks for speaking with me on Tuesday, June 2, about the goals of the Mariposa Agency and
the duties of the assistant account manager position. The position you described seems to be an
excellent match for my training and skills.