Solutions – Chapter 13 ⚫ 2
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EXPERIENCE
Primerica Financial Services, Pueblo, CO
Financial Consultant, January 2014 to present
• Applied communication skills in assisting clients in obtaining mortgages, consolidating mortgage
loans, and assessing life insurance needs
• Praised by supervisor for reliability and painstaking work
Target, Littleton, CO
Line Manager, September 2008–March 2012
• Developed team and leadership skills in supervising 22 cashiers and front-end associates
Mr. K’s Floral Design of Denver
Teacher, August 2008–September 2009
• Developed leadership skills by teaching courses in flower design to classes with an average of 25
students each
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ACTIVITIES
• American Accounting Association (AAA), Chair, Spring and Fall, 2014
• Movimiento Estudiantil Chicano de Aztlán (M.E.Ch.A), Webmaster, January-May 2015
13.2 Radical Rewrite
Inadequate Cover Letter
Weaknesses
a. Fails to use the receiver’s name in the salutation.
b. Neglects to identify the position title and specifically where the announcement appeared.