150 Chapter 11 Solutions
c. Weakness: Despite the parenthetical reference (Henderson 44), the passage is plagiarized. It
follows the original too closely in sentence structure and word choice. Only a few words here
and there were changed.
Improved Passage: Cellular phone use around the world is increasing rapidly as a result of
decreasing computing costs. Half of all new phones are now wireless. Poorer countries are
experiencing the most rapid development because they can move straight to cellular without
focusing on the outdated technology of landlines (Henderson 44).
11.7 Factoring and Outlining a Problem (Obj. 2)
Outline Key
I. Should the Virgin America tour training program be located in Burbank?
A. Does Burbank have adequate access to air travel?
II. What entertainment areas are available to serve as training sites?
A. Does NBC offer training seminars, guest speakers, and other resources for tour
operators?
III. Who could be invited to serve on an advisory committee?
A. Would representatives of the travel community be interested?
B. Would executives of other major airlines be willing to serve with JAL people?
C. How could these people be motivated to participate?
11.8 Developing a Work Plan (Obj. 2)
If your students are writing a long report, you will want to have them complete this exercise as