Instructor Manual: Guffey/Loewy, Business Communication: Process & Product, 10e, 2022, 9780357129234; Chapter 5:
Organizing and Drafting Business Messages
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Chapter 5: Organizing and Drafting Business Messages
Table of Contents
Purpose and Perspective of the Chapter …………………………………………………………………………. 2
Cengage Supplements …………………………………………………………………………………………………… 2
Chapter Objectives ………………………………………………………………………………………………………… 2
Complete List of Chapter Activities and Assessments ……………………………………………………… 3
Key Terms ……………………………………………………………………………………………………………………… 4
What’s New in This Chapter ……………………………………………………………………………………………. 6
Instructor Manual: Guffey/Loewy, Business Communication: Process & Product, 10e, 2022, 9780357129234; Chapter 5:
Organizing and Drafting Business Messages
Purpose and Perspective of the Chapter
The purpose of this chapter is to explain how to carry out the second phase of the writing
process: researching, organizing, and drafting. First, we define research (formal and
Cengage Supplements
The following product-level supplements provide additional information that may help you
in preparing your course. They are available in the Instructor Resource Center.
Transition Guide (provides information about whats new from edition to edition)
Educators Guide (describes assets in the platform with a detailed breakdown of
activities by chapter with seat time)
Chapter Objectives
The following objectives are addressed in this chapter:
5-1 Compare two forms of research that begin Phase 2 of the 3-x-3 writing process.
5-2 List techniques that help writers generate and sort ideas to solve problems.
5-3 Demonstrate methods for organizing ideas to show relationships.
Complete List of Chapter Activities and Assessments
For additional guidance, refer to the Teaching Online Guide.
Chapter
Objective
PPT
Slide
Activity/Assessment
Duration
Certification Standard
5-1
6
Case Study Small Group
Activity in PPT
90 min
BUSPROG: Communication
DISC: Analysis
5-2
10
Small Group Activity in PPT
90 min
BUSPROG: Communication
DISC: Theory application
5-3
18
Knowledge Check in PPT
15 min
BUSPROG: Ethics
DISC: Theory application
5-4
26
Knowledge Check in PPT
15 min
BUSPROG: Communication
DISC: Standard English
5-6
46
Small Group Discussion in
PPT
40 min
BUSPROG: Communication
DISC: Patterns; Theory
application
5-15-6
48
Grammar and Mechanics
Quiz in PPT
30 min
BUSPROG: Communication
DISC: Standard English
Pre-Course Diagnostic*
DISC: Standard English
N/A
N/A
Grammar and Mechanics
Check-Up Activities*
N/A
BUSPROG: Communication
DISC: Standard English
Chapters
46
N/A
Why Does the Writing
Process Matter to Me? (Unit
02 The Writing Process in
the Digital Era)**
5 min
N/A
5-15-6
N/A
Learn It: Chapter 05
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Business Messages
3545
min
N/A
5-15-6
N/A
Assignment: Chapter 05
Organizing and Drafting
Business Messages
20 min
N/A
5-15-6
N/A
Video Presentation: Tips for
Productive Brainstorming
Sessions (Chapter 05
Organizing and Drafting
Organizing and Drafting
Business Messages
min
Mail (Unit 02 The Writing
Process in the Digital
Era)***
10 min
N/A
* These activities appear before the student will begin the course.
** This activity appears at the beginning of Unit 2.
*** This activity appears at the end of Unit 2.
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Key Terms
Active voice: Sentences in which the subject is the doer of the action (such as Shawn
posted the message).
Brainstorming: The spontaneous contribution of ideas from members of a group; a
popular method for generating ideas.
Instructor Manual: Guffey/Loewy, Business Communication: Process & Product, 10e, 2022, 9780357129234; Chapter 5:
Organizing and Drafting Business Messages
Crowdsourcing: A collaborative effort that describes the practice of requesting ideas
online from unknown crowd members rather than from traditional employees or
contractors.
Dangling modifier: A modifier dangles when the word or phrase it describes is missing
from its sentence (e.g., pressing the wrong key, the document suddenly disappeared).
punctuated as if it were a complete sentence.
Frontloading: Another name for the direct method, which places the main idea first.
Fused sentence: A sentence error that results when two independent clauses are
incorrectly joined (fused) together without a conjunction or a semicolon; also called a run-
on sentence.
Indirect paragraph plan: A paragraph used to explain and persuade that starts with the
supporting sentences and concludes with the topic sentence.
removed.
Paragraph: A group of sentences about one idea.
Parallelism: A writing technique that uses similar construction, such as researching,
organizing, and writing to create balanced writing.
Passive voice: Sentences in which the subject is acted upon, such as The message was
posted by Shawn.
Pivoting paragraph plan: A paragraph used to compare and contrast that begins with a
limiting sentence that offers a contrasting or negative idea before delivering the topic
sentence.
Research: Collecting relevant information about a topic before beginning to write a
message.
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Whats New in This Chapter
The following elements are improvements in this chapter from the previous edition:
Updated the Zooming In opening scenario featuring MyEvent.com by including
examples of successful events ranging from water purification systems in third
world villages to Miles for Midwives in Brooklyn, New York.
Added mind mapping to brainstorming techniques so that students can visualize
how ideas can be generated, illustrated, and even executed.
Chapter Outline
In the outline below, each element includes references (in parentheses) to related content.
CH.##” refers to the chapter objective; “PPT Slide #” refers to the slide number in the
PowerPoint deck for this chapter (provided in the PowerPoints section of the Instructor Resource
Center); and, as applicable for each discipline, accreditation or certification standards (DISC).
Introduce the chapter and review learning objectives for Chapter 5. (PPT Slide 2).
I. Organizing and Drafting Messages Begins With Research (5-1, PPT Slides 37,
DISC: Purpose; Audience)
a. The 3-x-3 writing process involves three phases. (Figure 5.1)
b. This chapter focuses on the second phase: researching, organizing, and
drafting.
f. Informal Research: Many routine taskssuch as drafting e-mails, memos,
letters, informational reports, and oral presentationsrequire information
that you can collect informally.
g. Informal research methods:
i. Explore your companys files.
h. Formal Research: Information for long reports and proposals may be
obtained through formal research using primary or secondary sources.
i. Formal research methods:
i. Primary sources: firsthand experiences such as surveys, interviews,
observation, and experimentation
j. Case Study Activity: 90 minutes total. Zooming InHow a Wedding Website
Grew Into a $100 Million Event Planning Business
Break class into groups of three students. Have students read through the
case study found at the beginning of the chapter and answer the questions
ten-minute presentation to the class of their findings and reactions.
In what ways would research (gathering information) have helped
the founders of MyEvent.com move beyond their original wedding
platform and remain relevant in the rapidly changing world of
Internet commerce?
II. Generating Ideas to Solve Problems (5-2, PPT Slides 811, DISC: Purpose; Theory
application)
a. Brainstorming the spontaneous contribution of ideas from members of a
group with an emphasis on quantity and not quality
i. Define the problem and establish a time limit for the session.
ii. Set a quota, such as a minimum of 100 ideas.
b. Brainwriting write ideas on flip charts, paper, or post-it slips and then
discuss, organize, and rank the best ideas
c. Mind mapping a process for generating and sorting ideas emphasizing
visual concepts (Figure 5.2)
i. A single concept is drawn as an image in the center of a blank page
with associated words and images branching out to show the
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d. Crowdsourcing the practice of requesting ideas or services online from
unknown crowd members rather than from traditional employees or
contractors
i. Crowdsourcing is an inexpensive way to build brand awareness and
solve problems.
e. Small Group Activity: 90 minutes total. Activity 5.14Brainstorming: Solving
a Problem on Campus
Break class into groups of three to five students. Have students complete the
activity found at the end of the chapter. After reviewing the brainstorming
exercise instructions, student groups should choose a problem on their
III. Organizing Ideas to Show Relationships (5-3, PPT Slides 1218, DISC: Rhetorical
considerations; Audience; Purpose; Patterns)
a. Skilled writers group similar items together and then place ideas in a
strategic sequence that helps the reader understand relationships and
accept the writers views.
b. Two simple techniques can help writers organize data: the scratch list and
the outline.
Organizing and Drafting Business Messages
i. An e-mail, memo, or letter is generally organized with an opening,
body, and closing.
ii. A procedure would contain a sequence of steps for the receiver to
follow.
g. After collecting data and generating ideas, writers must organize their
information.
h. The strategy you select is determined by how you expect the audience to
react to the message. (Figure 5.4)
i. Direct strategy the main idea comes first, followed by details,
explanation, or evidence
(a) Use the direct strategy when you expect the reader to be
pleased, mildly interested, or neutral.
i. Frontloading (getting to the main idea quickly) has three advantages:
i. Saves the readers time
k. Knowledge Check Activity: 15 minutes total. Test Your Workplace Etiquette
IQ
Have students check their workplace etiquette IQ by deciding whether the
following statements are true or false and then discuss the correct answers
with the class.
On your new job, you want to show sociability by friending everyone
on Facebook. To avoid favoritism, you should include managers and
bosses.
o False Dont friend everyone. Its important to maintain
boundaries between your work life and personal life. Do you
really want to see your boss in a bathing suit? Remember that
Facebook is for friends; Twitter is for everyone.
IV. Composing the First Draft With Effective Sentences (5-4, PPT Slides 1926,
DISC: Standard English; Rhetorical considerations; Patterns)
a. To avoid monotony and to add spark to their writing, communicators should
vary their sentences choosing from one of the following four types: simple,
compound, complex, and compound-complex.
d. Complex sentence contains an independent clause and a dependent clause
(Example: Because our company lacked a social media presence, it hired a
specialist.)
e. Compound-complex sentence contains at least two independent clauses
and one dependent clause (Example: Because our company lacked a social
media presence, it hired a specialist; however, our brand required time to build.)