Activities Solutions
15.1 Document for Analysis: Poorly Written Résumé
Weaknesses
a. Fails to present the name so that it can be easily read by a scanner.
b. Omits the area code for the telephone number.
c. Fails to provide a professional e-mail address.
Revision
Camille E. Montano
1340 East Phillips Avenue, Apartment D
Littleton, CO 80126
Phone: (303) 455-5182 E-mail: camille.montano@gmail.com LinkedIn
OBJECTIVE
Accounting associate position in which my recent accounting education and financial consulting
experience can help the organization achieve its goals.
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SUMMARY OF QUALIFICATIONS
Expect BA degree with accounting major and finance minor in June 2018
AA degree/certificate of completion in accounting
Two years of experience as part-time financial consultant in the mortgage industry
Developed people, team, and leadership skills as line manager for Target
Experienced in MS Word, MS Outlook, PowerPoint, Excel, and QuickBooks
Able to work well in stressful situations
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EDUCATION
Colorado State University, Pueblo, CO BA to be conferred June 2018
Major: Accounting; Minor: Finance GPA: 3.5 (A = 4.0)
Completed 64 upper-level units including courses in Analysis and Application of Accounting
Data and Financial Reporting
Dean’s Honor List, Fall 2017
Arapahoe Community College, Littleton, CO AA degree, Accounting, December 2015
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EXPERIENCE
Primerica Financial Services, Pueblo, CO January 2016–present
Part-Time Financial Consultant
Applied communication skills in assisting clients in obtaining mortgages, consolidating
mortgage loans, and assessing life insurance needs
Praised by supervisor for reliability and painstaking work
Target, Littleton, CO September 2014–August 2015
Line Manager