7.1 Document for Analysis: Wordy, Woeful E-Mail
To: Department Managers
From: Mellanie Mankin <mmankin@rockstudios>
Subject: Interviewing Five Employment Candidates
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Good morning, department managers,
Because we are now authorized to hire new employees, we have scheduled five promising
candidates who can help you with your team projects. They are scheduled for interviews on the
following dates:
May 5 Conference Room
May 9 Office 22
May 12 Conference Room
To prepare for the meetings, please study the candidates’ attached résumés. Send me your
ranking lists before May 1 so that we can work together to hire the top people you select.
Melllanie Mankin, Manager
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