and on the DVD of student speeches that accompanies this edition of The Art of Public
Speaking. Below is a synopsis.
Introduction: The speaker gains the audience’s attention by relating the story of a little
girl’s trip to Disney World. The vivid imagery of the opening paragraph helps create
an emotional bond with the audience. In paragraph 3, the speaker reveals that the
little girl in the story is her sister, Trisha. She then reveals the subject of the speech
and previews the praiseworthy characteristics of the Make-A-Wish Foundation that
she will discuss in the body.
Body: Paragraphs 4–9 constitute the body of the speech. Notice that the speaker does
not get bogged down in details that are more appropriate to an informative
speech. Instead, she uses statistics and examples about the Make-A-Wish
Foundation to illustrate its generosity, selflessness, and ability to heal through
hope.
Paragraphs 4–5 deal with generosity. After noting that Make-A-Wish paid for
everything in her family’s trip to Disney World, the speaker praises the donors, busi-
ness partners, and philanthropists who help contribute the money that allows Make-
A-Wish to spend $140 million each year granting the wishes of children in need.
Paragraphs 6–7 deal with the Make-A-Wish Foundation’s selflessness. As in
the other two main points, the speaker introduces this one with a signpost
(“Second”), followed by a clear statement of the trait of the foundation discussed in
the main point (in this case, selflessness). This structure helps the audience track
the speaker’s development of ideas. The speaker illustrates the foundation’s
selflessness by mentioning several well–known personalities who volunteer on its
behalf. She also notes that there are 25,000 unsung volunteers who give their time
to Make-A-Wish. She ends the second main point with the phrase “That’s
selflessness.” She uses the same pattern of wording at the end of main point one
(“That’s generosity”) and at the end of main point three (“That’s healing”). The
parallel structure reinforces the speaker’s ideas and lends elegance to her speech.
Paragraphs 8–9 constitute the third main point, which deals with how Make-A-
Wish heals through hope. After citing several examples in paragraph 8 of children
receiving their wishes, the speaker returns in paragraph 9 to the story of her sister.
This is a particularly moving and heartfelt portion of the speech. Not only does it il-
lustrate how Make-A-Wish can heal through hope, but it answers a potential ques-
tion raised in the introduction: What happened to the speaker’s sister? Paragraph 9
provides a happy answer.
Students who watch the video of the speech should note how integral the
speaker’s delivery is to her overall effectiveness. Delivered with sincerity, simplicity,
and a smile, “Make a Wish” quickly establishes an emotional connection with the
audience, a connection that continues through the conclusion. The sparkle in the