REVISION CHECKLIST: PROPOSALS
Look critically at your draft, get response—and revise
Once you have a complete draft, read it over carefully, focusing on how you
define the problem and support the solution you propose—and the way you
• How does the proposal open? Will it capture readers’ interest? Does it make
• Is the proposed solution explicit and compelling? Have you provided enough
evidence to show that it’s feasible and will address the problem—and that it’s
better than other possible solutions? Is there an explicit statement of what it will
accomplish?
• Have other possible solutions been acknowledged fairly—and how well do you
respond to them? Are there any other solutions that need to be considered?
• Is the proposal easy to follow? If not, try adding transitions or headings.
• How would you characterize the style? Is it appropriate for your intended
audience? Consider the choice of words, the level of formality, and so on.
• How does the proposal conclude? Will it inspire the change or action you’re
calling for? How else might it conclude?