Chapter 6: Writing a Business Plan
achieve its social mission, while earning a profit and attracting the attention of
potential investors.
Michael Graves and Jill Simpson just left their jobs with Microsoft to launch a
business that will sell a new type of fax machine. They wrote a full business
plan that they’ve asked you to review. When reading the plan, you noticed that
several key sections begin with the phrase “We believe….” Is any
knowledgeable person who reads this business plan going to know what “We
believe…” really means? What is the problem with including the phrase “We
believe…” to introduce key sections of a business plan?
Answer: The problem with the statement “We believe” is that it suggests what
is about to be said is based on what the writer believes to be true, not what has
been proven to be true by data or careful analysis. Business plans ring hollow if
they’re based on the writer’s personal beliefs or mere speculation or guesswork.
The most compelling business plans are based on conclusions produced by solid
primary and secondary research.
Recently, Megan, Jennifer, and Mark, the cofounders of a medical products
company, presented their business plan to a group of investors in the hopes of
receiving funding for their venture. One of the investors asked the three, “How
much of your personal money do each of you have invested in this firm?” Is this
a legitimate question for the proposed investor to ask? Why would an investor
want to know how much of their own money each cofounder has committed to
the proposed new venture?
Answer: It is a legitimate question to ask. The investor wants to know how
much “skin in the game” that Megan, Jennifer, and Mark have. There are two
reasons that investors want entrepreneurs to have “skin in the game.” The first
is that if the co-founders of a business don’t have sufficient confidence in the
future of their firm to invest (and risk) their own money, why should the
investor take the risk? Second, if the co-founders of a business have little or no
money of their own invested in a venture, it is much easier for them to walk
away than if they had their own money invested and at risk.
Patty Carroll is thinking about opening a high-end fashion boutique in an
affluent suburb of Minneapolis. She contacts an angel investor she knows has
previously invested in this type of firm and asked if he would read her business
plan. She received the following response from the angel investor: “I would be
glad to read your plan. But you should know that when examining business
plans for high-end fashion boutiques, the section that I concentrate on with
great intensity is called ‘The Economics of the Business.’” Why do you think
the angel investor concentrates on this particular section of a business plan
when studying proposals to launch a high-end fashion boutique? What
specifically do you think the angel investor is interested in understanding when
concentrating on this section?