Note: This sample solution devotes one paragraph to each stage of the AIDA model. The idea that
experienced employees are considering leaving is a definite attention-getter, then the next two
paragraphs introduce and expand on the solution of job sharing. Note that a full-blown proposal would
probably contain more detail, but this sample message shows students an effective way to structure the
message.
[subject line] A potential solution to a major work/life balance issue
Hi Shauna,
In the cafeteria last week, a group of us got into an interesting conversation about work/life balance.
Turns out several of us have been wrestling with the same dilemma: How to reduce our workloads so that
we can make time to deal with family responsibilities or pursue personal interests. For example, two of us
However, there is a potential solution for employees facing this dilemma, and it would be a winning
solution for the company as well. My research indicates that a growing number of companies now offer
job sharing, where two employees split the responsibilities, compensation, and benefits of one job. The
most common arrangement is where one employee works two days a week and the other works three, but
Job sharing does present some challenges, but lots of people have found creative ways around the hurdles.
To keep things from falling through the gap, some duos divide their responsibilities by project, client, or
some other definable boundary. For those jobs where things can’t be divided quite so cleanly, the pair has
Would you consider pitching this idea to executive management at your next meeting? I can provide more
details, including some cost/benefit analyses and guidelines for starting a low-risk pilot program. This
[LO-2] AACSB: Written and oral communication
12.40. Message Strategies: Persuasive Business Messages
Note: Students can find supporting information on the websites of manufacturers such as
www.lifespanfitness.com, but they should be sure to complement this with objective reviews and studies.
As with all such messages, the sender’s relationship with the recipient should determine the tone, of
course. This message assumes a casual, comfortable working relationship.
[subject line] Walking my way to higher productivity