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10.1. Message strategies: Requesting an Adjustment

Note: The customer has a strong basis for an adjustment here,

To: support@songthrong.com

[subject line]: Request for full refund on account number 209847

I have been a SongThrong.com subscriber for two months. During this period, the service has been

During my first month (June), I encountered system outages frequently, so starting at the beginning of

Thank you,

[LO-2] AACSB: Written and oral communication

10.2. Message Strategies: Requesting an Adjustment

Note: Assuming that a fair adjustment will be made, the writer uses the organization plan for a direct

request. The first paragraph requests a replacement product. The middle paragraph explains all the

details: why Frye is writing the manufacturer, what Frye has already done to attempt to solve the

problem, and when the watch was actually purchased. The first sentence in the closing paragraph

provides an incentive for the company to honor the claim. Frye also makes it easy for the customer

service representative to contact her and has enclosed a copy of the relevant document.

Customer Service Department

Calvin Klein, Inc.

205 West 39th Street

New York, NY 10018

Dear Customer Service Representative:

The CK Ladies’ Gold Plated watch that I purchased three months ago has stopped. I need your assistance

in obtaining a replacement.

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Sincerely,

[LO-2] AACSB: Written and oral communication

10.3. Message Strategies: Requesting Action

Note: Begin the email with a cordial opening, thanking managers for their previous cooperation and then

making the direct request to nominate one person to serve on an advisory team. Close by mentioning

additional benefits to encourage a response by the requested date. Also reassure readers that the new

clothing line will have positive results. Following is a possible example:

[subject line] Seeking Advisory Team Nominations

I’ve had the pleasure of meeting many of you at past corporate events and during store visits, but for those

As we get ready to launch the new store-within-a-store concept with the new business casual line, we

want to be certain that we get input from the best minds in the retailing industry. To help us achieve that

By the end of next week, please nominate one of your employees who meets the following criteria:

As a store manager, you may be the local market expert, so I encourage you to nominate yourself if you

meet the above criteria.

Your input is valuable not only to help this new clothing line to succeed but also to help us all improve

[LO-2] AACSB: Written and oral communication

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10.4. Message Strategies: Granting Claims

Note: Students should focus on the end goal of this exercise: keeping the customer. This message should

be sincere, professional, and factual. Making an apology and providing specific details on how the

situation will be rectified will give the customer confidence in the business. Also, offering a token of

gratitude for the customer’s patronage will leave the customer with a positive reaction to a situation that

could have been disastrous. This is an opportunity to turn the relationship around in a positive manner.

Subject: Re: Complaint Regarding Wrong Delivery

Dear Mr. Ellison:

Please accept my deepest apologies for the distress caused to you by the incorrect delivery of a

I have initiated a full refund on the credit card you used to place your order; that amount should show up

If you have any questions or concerns regarding this matter, please contact me. I value your relationship

Partner, Flowers for All Occasions

[LO-4] AACSB: Written and oral communication

10.5. Message Strategies: Granting Claims

Note: This is an opportunity for students to see that a little humor and goodwill can go a long way to

retaining customers and even improving their perception of the company. Students should resist the urge

to negatively highlight the customer’s overzealous behavior; no point would be served. Instead, the

message should be used as a chance to professionally remind the customer of proper use, without being

offensive or condescending.

Subject: Re: Request for replacement of Razer Anansi keyboard

Dear Mr. Hapsberg,

Thanks for writing to us about the damage to your Razer Anansi keyboard. We are passionate about

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Razer products are built for serious action, but our keyboards are precision machines that are designed to

We love hearing from our gamers, so please keep writing in. Everyone at Razer wishes you good times

Sincerely,

[LO-4] AACSB: Written and oral communication

10.6. Message Strategies: Providing Routine Information; Media Skills: Podcasting

Note: Audio-only instructions present two major challenges. First, without the benefit of visuals, you’ll

need to take extra care to describe parts and procedures. (In many cases, a podcast would be

accompanied by some manner of graphical support.) Second, because listeners can’t skip back and forth

as easily as they can with printed instructions, every instruction needs to be clear, and the instructions

need to follow each other in logical order. The brief excerpted example here describes the steps necessary

to assemble a home weather station. (Based on “Assembly Instructions for the 1-Wire® Weather Station

V2.0/V3.0,” AAG Electronica website, www.aagelectronica.com.)

Welcome to the assembly instructions for your new weather station. At various points during this

recording, I’ll say “pause” to give you time to complete the step I’ve just described. When you’re ready,

just hit play on your smartphone or music player to move on to the next step.

Begin by carefully removing the weather station housing from the protective plastic bag. Pause.

Next, locate the weather vane, the part that looks like a large arrow. Pause. You will attach it to the shaft

Now locate the wind cup assembly. It has three small cups arranged in a circle around a central hub. You

Your weather station is now ready for testing. Locate the eight-foot test cord and plug one end into the

Start the 1-Wire Weather® software that you installed earlier. Pause. When the software starts for the first

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[continues]

[LO-4] AACSB: Written and oral communication

10.7. Message Strategies: Providing Routine Information

Note: In the introduction, refer briefly to the reason for the posting without going into details, since

they’re likely to make employees defensive. Keep your message short. Use bulleted lists for easy

reference.

Listening Skills for the Workplace

This morning in our weekly staff meeting, I noticed some behaviors that weren’t conducive to our usually

supportive team environment. Most of the behaviors focused on the inability to listen, so I’ve put together

First, take a moment to remember the benefits of effective listening:

Enhances your performance and influence within your company and industry

Next, practice these skills to become a good listener:

Take notes: don’t rely on your memory.

[LO-4] AACSB: Written and oral communication

10.8. Message Strategies: Routine Responses

Note: Student responses to this exercise will vary, but their critiques should be rational and fact-based,

with an emphasis on how real-life customers would use the website.

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[subject line] Feedback on walmart.com

Thank you for requesting my feedback on walmart.com.

Overall, I find the site appealing and easy to use. The graphics are attractive and well produced, and I had

I did, however, have trouble reading some text elements because of their color and small size. For

example, the shipping information for each product was very difficult to make out unless I increased the

issues.

Sincerely,

[LO-4] AACSB: Written and oral communication

10.9. Message Strategies: Routine Announcements [LO-4]

Note: The company’s internal micromessaging system is more generous than Twitter, but even at 200

characters, the messages need to be concise and unambiguous.

Our annual United Way campaign begins June 1. If you would like to donate, the company will match

United Way’s education initiative aims to cut the high school dropout rate in half. The research-based

United Way’s income initiative aims to help more Americans achieve financial stability. Based on

[LO-4] AACSB: Written and oral communication

10.10. Message strategies: Providing Recommendations

Note: As the candidate has requested, keep the letter fairly general.

To Hiring Managers:

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intern at Orbitz during the summer of 2016 and provided a great deal of valuable assistance in a number

of areas.

Max is an exceptionally fast learner. She quickly became proficient with our content management system

and always used it properly. While other interns have struggled to learn and utilize the Orbitz system,

While Max was certainly a quick study, she was always willing to ask intelligent questions about our

business. Other interns and many new employees tend to avoid asking questions because they don’t want

Another important element of Max’s character is her willingness to respond to suggestions for

improvement. Soon after she joined me at Orbitz, I expressed concern that she was spending too much

I am confident that Max would be an asset to your organization. In addition to the traits I’ve outlined, she

is mature and professional, always on time, and eager to assist with even the most mundane tasks. Of the

Best regards,

[LO-4] AACSB: Written and oral communication

10.11. Message Strategies: Writing Routine Information Messages; Composition Modes:

Summarizing

Note: With the announced merger of Tesla and SolarCity, the structure and content of the SolarCity

website might change. At the time of writing, information on the SolarLease program could be found at

http://www.solarcity.com/residential/affordable-solar-lease. Here is a post based on information

available at publication.

SolarCity makes it easy to add solar power to your home with SolarLease, a unique financing option that

lets you go solar without any upfront costs and the chance to save money from day one. With this

What’s more, there are no unexpected repair costs to worry about because they are covered under this

program. SolarLease includes continuous performance monitoring to make sure your system performing

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[LO-4] AACSB: Written and oral communication

10.12. Message Strategies: Good News Messages

Note: This message should focus not only on what is being offered, but also how they will benefit the

reader. Students should include information that makes these services appropriate for the reader’s

personal needs. Specific details of the services offered will enable readers to clearly understand the what,

how, and when of the offering.

[post title] A Hot Stix Center to Open Soon at Indian Wells Golf Resort

Hot Stix is thrilled to announce a new fitting center to open at the Indian Wells Golf Resort within the

Every golfer has a unique swing. Accordingly, golf clubs need to match the individual specifications of

the golfer, which is done through the process of club fitting. Club fitters use advanced technology such as

The Indian Wells Hot Stix center will provide three fitting programs—Performance Fitting, Tour Fitting,

and Platinum Game Fitting.

All fitting programs will be done using Hot Stix software and expert fitters. Moreover, each player will

have the opportunity to demo a broad range of club and shaft options. Contact Jared McKinsey at

1-800-123-5678 or log into www.indianwellsgolfresort.com for more details.

[LO-4] AACSB: Written and oral communication

10.13. Message Strategies: Good-News Messages

Note: Use the direct approach to share the good news immediately, but try to do so in a way that (a)

doesn’t sound boastful for yourself or your department and (b) lets the entire company share in the glory.

Also, within the context of complimenting the department, keep the focus on the team, not on yourself as

the manager. In addition, since this is a blog posting, and a relatively simple announcement at that, keep

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it short and to the point. People will want to hear about the award, but no one outside the department is

likely to be interested in lots of details.

And the Webby Goes to . . . Band-Aid Magic Vision

The Webby Awards, the online equivalent of the Emmy, Grammy, Oscar, and Tony awards, recognize the

best efforts in web and interactive design. I am thrilled to share the news that our Band-Aid Magic Vision

[LO-4] AACSB: Written and oral communication

10.14. Message Strategies: Goodwill Messages

Note: Begin with a message of appreciation, much deserved by the community. While the citizens of

Loganville unselfishly offered their assistance, publicly thanking them will go a long way to ensuring a

continuing relationship of goodwill. By offering a sincere and thoughtful message of appreciation, Ace

Construction has the opportunity to solidify a prominent position in the community.

Thank you, fellow citizens of Loganville, for saving Ace Construction during the storm last weekend,

which pushed the Logan River past flood level. Many of you came forward to build the emergency levee

that protected our facilities from the rising water levels. Your action prevented a major calamity. I

[LO-4] AACSB: Written and oral communication

10.15. Message Strategies: Goodwill Messages

Note: A message such as this should be a celebration, so feel free to dial up the energy and have a little

fun with it.

Wow! We always have high hopes for the Spring Surge sales contest every April, but you folks set a new

Now for the fun part! Big cheers and a hearty “well done!” to our top three performers. Please

congratulate them and try not to be too jealous when they enjoy their prizes:

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In addition to these standout performers, every member of the sales team had a positive and productive

Many thanks for everyone on the management team—and keep on selling!

[LO-4] AACSB: Written and oral communication

10.16. Message Strategies: Goodwill Messages

Note: Assume that this message would be hand-written on high-quality stationery. Use the guidelines

from the chapter to craft a message that is short, simple, and sincere.

Dear Arthur, Jordan, and Amy,

I am deeply sorry for your loss. Shari was a respected and cherished colleague, and I know from talking

Sincerely,

[LO-4] AACSB: Written and oral communication

10.17. Message Strategies: Goodwill Messages

Note: This message needs to be sincere at a personal level without overstepping professional boundaries

by assuming too much familiarity. Keep it short and simple; remember that the fact you care to write is

more important than the specific language used.

[LO-4] AACSB: Written and oral communication

ASSISTED GRADING QUESTIONS (accessed on MyBCommLab)

routine messages. [LO-1] AACSB: Written and oral communication

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10.19. To prevent good-news announcements from being all about you and your company, look for ways

to emphasize shared benefits (such as employment opportunities stemming from a plant