Revise the following poorly written opening of a claim letter requesting an exchange of
a smartphone still under warranty. Write the opening sentence only.
My TravelerXtra smartphone was purchased from your online store on September 15,
2014, for your attractive price of $228.88 plus $24.48 shipping and handling with no
service contract required. I have used my TravelerXtra for business texting, e-mailing,
and phoning ever since, which was exactly what I needed it to do. Yesterday my
TravelerXtra shut itself down out of the blue, and I can’t use it for anything. Now I’m
without a business tool and over $250, which makes me feel ripped off because I
received only one month of service from this phone. When I tried to exchange it at one
of your land-based stores, the clerk told me, “No way, dude. You buy online, you fly
online.” Now what?
Answer:
Most workplace communications will involve routine messages that are positive or
neutral. Therefore, they should be organized using the ____________________
strategy.
Answer: