Interviewers quickly scan a resume in about 40 seconds to learn about a job candidate’s
skills, accomplishments, and attributes. Because interviewers spend such a short time
reading resumes, the writing must be direct and simple. Victor, a recent college
graduate, is applying for a job and has written the following sentences in his résumé to
describe his accomplishments.
I was a receptionist at a doctor’s family medical practice.
My work included taking appointments, filing charts, answering phones, and running
errands.
I was a sales person at a hardware store where I worked with selling windows, doors,
tools and other customer service.
I eventually became a manager at the hardware store, ordering products and supplies, as
well as supervised five employees.
I spent two summers working at the university’s admission office, showing prospective
students the campus and answering phones and other clerical duties.
I was a summer camp counselor with kids that have special needs. My responsibilities
included handling special activities and providing daily assistance to kids as needed.
Required:
Rewrite Victor’s work experience section of his résumé so that it is more effective.
Answer: