94) Rewrite this résumé according to current guidelines for effective résumé writing. Assume the
position being applied for is a marketing analyst for a foreign electric car company trying to
enter the U.S. market. Feel free to create some new facts to help create a more effective résumé.
Sharon Bueller
859 Marlo Avenue
Benton, NJ
(504) 555-6308
prettybueller@abcmail.com
PERSONAL: Married, in good health, 5’6″, 155 lbs.; hobbies include cooking, music, and
reading.
JOB OBJECTIVE: To obtain a responsible position in market analysis with a good company.
Education: MBA degree, University of Louisiana, 2001.
Graduated with a 3.0 average. Member of the varsity cheer leading squad. President of Helvetica
League. Was voted as Miss Congeniality at the county fair.
WORK EXPERIENCE
McShear Aeronautics , 2004 to now, marketing analyst
Responsible for promotional activities.
95) Change the following statements into active statements that show results:
Responsible for developing a new format for minutes of team meetings.
Assigned the organization of team building activities at team outings.