“Please find a document attached to this e-mail. You can find therein the criteria for
exchange and replacement of products.” He uses language that is legalistic to avoid
legal problems. As a best practice in business communication, which of the following
should Meyer do to improve his response e-mail?
A. Use herein instead of therein.
B. Avoid using legalistic language.
C. Write the e-mail from his point of view.
D. Increase the legalistic language use.
E. Begin his message with “Gentlemen, please find a document”
Answer:
Mathew, a senior marketing manager, is preparing a presentation for the board of
directors of his company. The presentation depicts the pattern of sales for the company’s
top products in different geographical areas. Mathew uses graphs, charts, and tables to
present the data. However, the evening before the presentation, he hears that the board
of directors considers visuals and data displays a waste of time. In this scenario, which
of the following should Mathew do in order to ensure that his presentation is
well-received?
A. He should go ahead with the visuals he has, because a presentation should have very