Which of the changes listed below would make the following paragraph more coherent?
As an undergraduate student, you can satisfy the university writing requirement and
meet an important graduation requirement by scoring a 4 or 5 on either of the advanced
placement English exams (Language & Composition or Literature & Composition). You
can also meet this requirement by receiving transfer credit for an approved college-level
writing or writing-intensive course you have taken elsewhere and in which you have
received a grade of B or higher. Finally, you can meet this requirement by taking and
receiving a passing grade in a writing course at this university. The following two
courses, for example, are dedicated primarily to the development of writing skills and
can be used to meet the writing requirement: English 205 (Technical Communication)
or English 200 (Rhetoric and Writing). If you have any further questions, please call
Professor Lee Klein, Director of Writing Programs, in the Department of English at
(518) 555-8122.
A writer is considering revising the long paragraph below. Would the best place to start
a second paragraph be at (1), (2), or (3)?
Although graphics can enhance a website, they can also serve as a distraction. Having
too many graphics that do not contribute to the content of the site may make your
company appear unprofessional, as well as contributing to slow download times. Your
site, for example, has thirty moving images. (1) Such images do not reflect the serious
nature of your business. When it comes to graphics, we suggest you adopt a “less is
more” approach. (2) Another troublesome feature of your site is the scrolling banner
used as a navigation element. To reach certain pages on your site, users must quickly
click the links scrolling across the banner. If they miss a link, they must wait another 20
seconds until the link scrolls by again. (3) Because this site is not designed to be a game
but rather a place for customers to learn more about handling hazardous materials, you
should not use a scrolling banner as a navigation element. We recommend that you use
standard navigation buttons aligned along the left margin or across the top of the page.
Also, you may want to include a text-only navigation element at the bottom of the page.