In the following excerpt from a proposal seeking funding to upgrade a police
department’s crime lab, which technique for making a persuasive case listed below does
the writer NOT use?
In the past four years, the department’s crime lab has experienced an increase in
fingerprint evidence for comparisons. The increase in volume is a result of submissions
from other rural agencies in the state. However, because our agency cannot access data
maintained within the state’s Automated Fingerprint Identification System (AFIS),
submissions are limited to manual searches of the 14,000 files maintained by our
department. You can imagine the likelihood of missing a fingerprint match while
looking through thousands of fingerprints by hand. In fact, Harlan Andrews, a Senior
Investigator at the Federal Bureau of Investigation’s laboratory, reports that manual
searches often fail to find matches when in fact fingerprint matches exist. To prevent
such errors, our department needs to upgrade its computer system to allow access to
AFIS.
Which characteristic of an attractive professional persona has the writer of the following
excerpt NOT shown?
As you probably already know, we have a problem with our current documentation.
Users cannot easily locate the serial numbers necessary to complete the online
registration step. The solution below will help us address this problem and eliminate the
customer-support calls we get. It will also solve a few other problems. Last week, others
suggested different solutions. However, I know they will not work. The best course of
action is to prominently display the serial numbers at the start of the chapter labeled
“Registering Your Product.” Our users expect to find the numbers in this chapter.
The following statement appears in a proposal to install a large pond near an
amphitheater: “Jones Company is an expert in pond preparation. We installed our first
pond at Jameson Park earlier this year.” What type of reasoning does the passage
display?