A writing team regularly uses email to coordinate projects and to maintain a friendly,
collaborative work environment. Which of the flaws listed below does the following
email exhibit? (Select all that apply.)
To: Documentation Department
Subject: Status of Trace Instrument’s Consulting Project
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> It would be nice to know the status of the Trace project so I can
> plan my summer hours with some accuracy.
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I understand that the uncertainty with the Trace Instrument’s project is causing some
scheduling nightmares. I want to briefly update you.
The project smaller than we first thought. Initially it seemed like a cast of thousands
would be involved. However, the company will pay for only three of us. Steve, Ming,
and Stacy will work on the project. While you may be disappointed, I’m sure some “cost
overruns” by the team will teach Trace Instruments a lesson
I have your name and will contract you if the project grows.
Wilma Vogel
According to Chapter 14, which of the correspondence types below is generally
considered the least formal?
You are writing a research paper on the hydrological impacts of hydraulic fracturing, or
fracking, on groundwater in your state. In your research, you have found that a professor
at a university in another state, Dr. Thomas Henry Wright, has conducted similar
research. You decide to write an inquiry letter to ask him some questions. Which
salutation is most appropriate for your letter?