14. Which of the following event leads is most useful to readers?
A. The school board held a meeting on Thursday night at Cherry Hill Elementary.
B. Dozens of concerned parents attended a school board meeting at Cherry Hill Elementary on Thursday.
C. The school board approved a plan on Thursday night to shorten summer vacation by one week.
D. Students were dismayed by what the school board decided at its meeting on Thursday night.
15. What should appear in the lead for a follow-up story on a topic you have already covered?
A. the newest information available
B. a recap of previous coverage
C. speculation on what might happen next
D. clarification of errors in previous coverage
16. Which of the following leads is problematic?
A. Sweet Treats bakery, owned and operated by celebrated local chef Tonya Redding, opened downtown
on Friday.
B. After one look at the menu, you won’t be able to resist visiting downtown’s newest bakery, Sweet
Treats, which opened on Friday.
C. Cupcake connoisseurs lined up around the block on Friday for the opening of local chef Tonya
Redding’s newest bakery, Sweet Treats.
D. Local chef Tonya Redding opened her newest venture, Sweet Treats Bakery, downtown on Friday
afternoon to rave reviews from critics and customers.
17. What is the best way to repair a “you should” lead?
A. Change the “you should” phrase to an “I will” phrase.
B. Include a clarifying sentence that participation is not mandatory, only suggested.
C. Find a source to give a quote with the “you should” phrase included.
D. Replace the “you should” phrase with information on how interested parties can participate.