Hayden Grant’s Paper
Dominick Aragona Workshop Worksheet
Fill this out and post one for each essay submitted to your Workshop Discussion Board BOFORE class the day you
discus the draft; also submit entire set as one document to instructor on Friday after workshop for credit.
1. What is the issue of the paper? Is it debatable?
-The issue in Hayden’s paper is that if protein powders are good for our health, or if they are
harming our body without consumers even knowing. This topic is debatable because nutritional
supplements are always being talked about and debated because of the many different viewpoints
on them.
2. Who is the target audience? How can you tell or why can’t you tell? Is it consistent?
-The target audience Hayden is writing to are the people trying to gain more muscle and use
protein powder in general. This doesn’t just mean he is targeting bodybuilders/athletes but
people who are just healthy in general. He starts to introduce the audience in the second
paragraph. He is very consistent throughout the paper.
3. What is the claim or thesis of this paper, in your own words?
-The thesis of the paper is that people can get the right amount of protein through a normal diet