REVISION 2 – Business Communication
1. After leaving the midtown meeting, Angela’s car would not start.
2. All requests for iPods and BlackBerrys were combined together in our proposal.
3. Although our last presentation bombed, beyond the shadow of a doubt our new
presentation will fly.
4. Are you aware of the fact that our budget has a deficit in the amount of approximately
$100,000?
5. As a general rule, we would not accept the return; however, we will in all probability
make an exception in this case.
