Nevoya Roberts
Prof.Mottola
Enlgish-201-02
14 March 2017
Poem #4 –Workshop Comments
Dear Kristine,
I enjoyed reading your poem. I love the tone, it’s very peaceful. It was great how you
express your love for being in your room. It seems to be you little hiding place. I would like to
know why you love your room so much and why does it bring you this peace. I also think that
the photo was a great choice because you can easily come up with a thousand stories just by
looking at it. I really loved the way you described the fabrics, it gave me a sense of how much I
also enjoy being in my bed.