Writing Handbook
3
Creating Major Sections of the Course Paper
Title
The title should provide enough information to allow the reader to predict the general
contents of the paper. The title should describe the paper’s main topic, concepts,
theories, issues discussed, and, in some cases, the relationships between the
concepts or theories.
The title should be as specific as possible without being too long. Avoid redundant
statements such as “A Study of….”
Original
Cultural differences between Chinese and American business people.
Revised
Cultural differences between Chinese and American business people: The
contract pre-negotiation stage.
Abstract or Executive Summary
The abstract or executive summary tells the reader what is in the paper. (The reader
will often decide whether to read the paper based on the abstract or executive
summary.) The abstract or executive summary provides brief descriptions of the
position statement, topic, or hypothesis; supporting evidence; results; and conclusion.
The abstract or executive summary must be very concise and yet provide a coherent
and accurate description of the contents of the paper. Note in the “revised” abstract
below that a topic sentence is placed at the beginning and a logical flow of ideas is
presented.
Original
Troubleshooting manufacturing machines is a difficult task for operators to do.
There are many examples of corporate training programs that fail to effectively
train operators to troubleshoot. In fact, most corporations do not even know that
training programs should be evaluated using the criteria of the rate of skill
acquisition, the transfer of training, and long-term retention. There are many
approaches to training for troubleshooting skills such as accelerated learning
(Sanders, 1997) and the cognitive psychology approach of Lesgold (1999). In
this paper the two approaches were compared. The cognitive psychology
approach was found to be best on all three criteria. Empirical studies of the
approaches were used to compare the approaches.
Revised
Published research studies were compared to determine the effectiveness of
two training methods used to teach machine operators how to troubleshoot
manufacturing equipment. The methods are (a) Sanders’ (1997) accelerated