Paul Guess
English 1030
19 April 2016
Remediation Essay
I decided to go into more detail about my image of Dabo Swinney. In my original photo
it is just a simple photo of Clemson Football head coach Dabo Swinney on the sidelines after
seemingly a down point in his career if you looked at the bigger picture of the photo. Although it
could possibly be just a bad play in the game, but this gives it the impression that there is a
serious upsetting event going on in Coach Swinney’s life at the moment. In my second image, I
added an inspiring quote that Dabo Swinney said himself it states “To be an overachiever you
have to be an over believer”. This quote is completely true in my opinion and it gives this picture
a whole new meaning with that simple quote. It takes away from the completely negative
thoughts that the picture originally portrays. The quote adds the thoughts that this is a optimistic
based image, saying that even if you are going through a rough time you will be able to learn
from it and improve yourself based on what you learned. While the original picture seemingly