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Bay City Information Systems
151 Bayview Road San Francisco, CA 81153
(650) 403-7849 www.baycity.com
May 5, 2014
Ms. Mary E. Sanders
Personnal Director
Cyclops Communication Technologies
1050 South Sierra Avenue
Los Angeles, CA 90019
Dear Ms. Anders:
I am responding to your request for an evaluation of Colleen Karmichael. Colleen was
hired as a clerk-typist by Bay City Informative Systems on April 4, 2012 and was
promoted to Administrative Assistant on August 1, 2013. At her review in June, I
