Critique for Descriptive Essay

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Critique for Descriptive Essay:
This essay made me wondering of the mysterious things that happened and will
happen in our planet earth. It is a realization that there may or may not be some other
creatures, aside from us, that are alive and are interested in Earth. Because some have
evidences that these wonders of the earth are made by human, and their available tools, they
have proved that humans are artistic in every way. Though the writer made the reader
interested in reading this essay, there are some errors that I have noticed.
This sentence, Built and expanded on from the third century B.Cis an improper
sentence because it is a cut sentence. A sentence should contain a subject, and after that is
the verb, and will be followed by an objective. And that sentence has no subject. In this
phrase, gigantic statue of Buddha in Leshan: located in Sichuan, China”, this should be
complete. Instead of using the colon (:), the writer should use “that is located”, so that the
readers, who are not fund of using flowering symbols and words, can understand. The verb
of a sentence must agree with the subject in number and in person. So instead of using
Stonehenge, the Great Wall of China, or the Leshan Buddha prove there is no limit and no
obstacle for human inspiration and innovation.consider using “Stonehenge, the Great Wall
of China, or the Leshan Buddha prove that there is no limit and no obstacle for human
inspiration and innovation.”. In this sentence, The people who raised Stonehenge had no
written language, their origins are unknown, it has a thought but it is not connected. So, it
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