Armour 1
Sherry Armour
Professor Nancy Heckel
Lit201 World Literature through the Renaissance
September 8, 2013
Dear Professor Heckel,
I decided to write about Fate and Karma. I chose to use The Story of Shakuntala, The
Epic Tale, to support my claim. I chose this story because it was a beautiful love story, with a
happy ending. Although there were parts in the story that seemed a little discouraging, in the
end, it all worked out. I am not sure if I really have any good strengths, because I kind of got
mixed up as to how I was supposed to organize the essay. I do not think that I really supported
the claim as to whether a story could have both fate and karma, or one or the other. I feel my
claim was not strong enough. I feel there were a lot of weak areas in my essay. There is no
particular part of the essay that I would like feedback, I need feedback on the entire essay.
Hopefully, the next essay will be much better and clearer.
Sincerely,
Sherry