Brief analysis of presentation
The topic is about how to protect the personal information on the internet. In the
introduction, Vu did a good job on presenting the subject of the speech. The audience have a
reason to listen to the topic because all of us need to protect our personal information while do
things by the internet. Besides, we can see the central ideas in the introduction. However, he
didn’t establish the credibility on what he going to tell the audience. He should come up with
reasons why he is the one to listen to on this topic. Why he has special knowledge or
understanding of the topic. The second thing he needs to put in here is preview the main ideas.
So the audience will keep track easily on the body of the speech.
The body of the speech is organized. Logical organization helps increase the clarity and
effectiveness of his speech. He presented 3 main points; also including supporting ideas of
each. Also, he presented 3 main points in the body equally. But he did not use the transition or
connection between these ideas to hold them together, therefore, the body is less smooth and
coherent. More examples will make the body more effective. Without reference, the speech
will not be gain the credibility, it’s just something you know about and you want to share them
give speech effectively.