Jennifer J. Linares Rivera
“All About Me Speech”
“What I need to Improve”– What I need to improve first is my position when giving a speech,
because I think I’m too inclined and it doesn’t look good. Another thing that I need to improve
when speaking is to take good care of my pauses, my flow, and make it slower and calmer
because it sounds like they are chasing me when I am speaking. I also need to improve my
pronunciation of words, because I see that some words are not understood very well, such as
when making subject changes. I also need to improve my confidence to speak, because in some
parts of the video my face seemed puzzled or confused. These areas are the ones that I need to
improve because, in my opinion, they do not look good in speeches, personally, it was not to
look at a speech like mine, because it has many things in which I need to improve, such as my
fluency and clarity when speaking before the public. I also need to better choose my visuals and
adapt it to any type of light, because in yesterday’s video it is not possible to distinguish the
content of the image. Also, choose visuals with fewer letters and more visuals so that you can
doing my presentation.